the noose of love

your love is wrapped around me
i cannot breathe
a new sense of euphoria filles me
my eyes are getting clouded
everything is getting white
but love,beautiful as it seems
is the reason i died



Poetry by Steven Mawer
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Written on 2006-05-18 at 02:48

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Onyeka Nwelue
Better breath Steve, my sweet boy. Let that love get lost...lol

Nicely written!
2006-05-21


Alfred Iwerebor
Lovely.
I guess you overdozed on love my friend.
Be more careful, so you don't die a second death.
2006-05-18


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah, the ecstasy of love can feel like dying!
I know exactly what you mean, I have been there.
Dying out of sheer joy of ecstacy!

Wow! This could be the theme of my next poem:
"Dying out of sheer joy of ecstacy"

See you a poem later...

***hugs***
Lovem xxx, Zoya
2006-05-18