Waiting for the ultimate feelings




On the Kathmandu road

walked a boy named Sue

and that's for true

he never got a clue

what he was doing there


- Searching the big and holy




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-05-21 at 19:21

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Pamela A Lamppa
This has much depth. Your title brings the reader, your words easily hold attention, and then the wonder....the thoughts.... the ideas flow. An excellent work. Well done. ~Pam
2006-05-25


Onyeka Nwelue
This is handsome...lol...no more beautiful, and the somewhat rhyming makes it more clear for me to understand...

Nice.
2006-05-21