Freedom.

Look at the sky above you.
Do you see what I see?
I see something free, something greate and peacefull.
It's a place where I want to be.

No one to tell me how I should be,
And that I can't be who I am.
No one to pick on me,
just because of the way I speak.

No rooles that I need to follow,
And no father who's angry when I don't.
Alot of partyes, and alot of freedom.
That's what I want.




Poetry by kittipuusen
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Written on 2006-05-26 at 15:13

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
to be free and just enjoy ourselves in this life with what makes us the most happy i think its all of us who would want it like that all the time too... i think this is a nice poem, in my mind it echoes young and older people's desire to not be going through or dealing with the daily stuff that isnt so fun... i like the reference to the sky... it is true its a peaceful sight... nice work... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2006-05-27