Another attempt at a cinquain.


What This Is...

Sometimes
the music of
your voice is enough to
make me tremble and break apart
my soul.



Poetry by Amanda Manmohan
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Written on 2006-05-27 at 04:03

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Kel
i like this one manda :) its short and pretty .. lol keep trying out all those different poetry techniques...at least you're making use of what us literature ppl in HNC are supposed to know about ... btw that sestina was really kool :D lol ttyl
2006-05-29


Emeka Chike Nwogu
This rendition is so captivating. What else
could this line mean? Good writing. Good concept. Keep it up.
2006-05-27


Kathy Lockhart
these are beautiful words, Amanda. I adore this piece. So should the one you love this way. It makes me smile to see love presented so sweetly. :) kathy
2006-05-27