A co writing with KJC


The battle and the love - - - co writing with KJC



A man cried out his heart
as his beloved long away
blamed him leaving family with child

Courage strengthened their arms,
in the heat of the battle warring
love inside beating, sounding an alarm.

Thoughts raging in mind, heart and soul
Exploding land mines on the fields
Thoughts warred his members, bodies cold

Struggling, bravely they fought
strengthening each other
courageously marching forward.

Losing one eye in battle wounds
his war ended in the heart within
returned home with love to be with his kin.

Tormented with the guilt and harm
leaving his loved ones behind,
linked in courage they bravely shined

But the winds were chancing
and the war was ending . . . the life
was growing and love awakening

He told her his thoughts, his behaviour.
Dragging him from his family
the end was telling that so many...

Brave hearted men who go out in battle
was only the feelings of anger and lust
so now they live together in trust

And the battle was ended
love is to forgive
let the trust make a dust

- To forgive once again




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-05-29 at 00:55

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a lovely co write great work you two and so difficult to tell styles apart well done

rgds mike
2006-05-29


Malin Johansson
A good poetry you two wrote here,
about forgiving and love....
Rgds
2006-05-29


Kathy Lockhart
I know this must touch many who have gone to battle, many who have been left at home, and many who have had heartbreaks because of them both. The forgiveness is the key and the committment is the door to unconditional, unfailing love. good write to both of you. :) kathy
2006-05-29


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
to forgive once again
and leave the past behind

Ashes to ashes
and dust to dust

Vanish the evil
and
flourish the good

Lets all live together
in peace and harmony

always believing
that better days
will come

The driving force
will always be
the hope to
forgive and move on...
2006-05-29