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These days

These days,
I keep on thinking about him
Am I in love with this gentle man
Everyday I laugh and chat with him
Can't believe but I think I am
Thousands times looking to myself on the mirrow
Am I looking good or looking like zero
Dressing the colours which he extremely like
But he never say you really look nice
How am I suppose to know
If he loves me or no
That's true he was always friendly with me
Together drinking coffee and tea
I feel disturb when I don't see him
Questioning my heart again and again
Sitting smoothly dreaming about him
Big lollipop in my mouth with a stick very thin
I'm thinking of opening my heart to him
Will he reject or accept my love
Something which makes me really shake
Something which make my heart ring and break.



Poetry by Zainab
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Written on 2006-05-29 at 06:51

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Zainab
I this agree with you coz I feel I have add many new ideas in this poem compering to my other poems , I hope you have a look once again:_)
2006-06-07


Amanda K
well u did wut u could so stop hunting the guy and believe when they say love will come after u at the end not the opposite. that was my comment concerning the theme. about the poem , you repated some pictures though expressed in some parts ealier in the poem. i suggest you add new ideas.

all the best,
2006-06-06


Zainab
this poem can be a remembrence to anyone who will fall in love it's how many of us go trough this condition
2006-05-29


Zainab
This poem it describes about a girl who is in love and thats not me it's just a poem came up in mind like always
2006-05-29


Kathy Lockhart
yes, lots of comtemplation going on here. again you have filled this poem with wonderful images. I could feel the angst and the overall concern of this one who thinks she is in love and wonders if it is returned. :) kathy
2006-05-29