Oh man, who is she? 06 June 2006.


She in the corner.

Hello the self-enflicted,
I have come to talk with you.
Cry the lonliness that never goes,
Yet who is she in the corner?

Goodbye the self-enflicted,
I have said what I need to say.
Borrow my knife and not your own,
I'll take the blame, my friend.

That girl in the corner I do see,
I join her; sit with her I might.
No one understands me you scream,
Blood on my floor I do forsee.

Hello. Hello again,
The darkness within my present,
The barbwire never lose and...
Yet who is she in the corner?





Poetry by John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-06-06 at 20:33

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Dahani
No one understands me you scream,

no one does understand me..
i am always like that girl who
sits in the corner..
being differint..
not like everyone else..
wonderful poem.
2007-03-28



you draw from deep so deep of your well and that shows in the final product :_)
2006-07-22



you draw from deep so deep of your well and that shows in the final product :_)
2006-07-22


Amanda K
John,
Your poem has suspence , terror and it is special.

Keep it up pal,
Amanda k
2006-07-18


ChiLLie
nice write,mr..
Ijust ask, where do you get it from??

>lots of hugs<
2006-06-27


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
John your style is as incredible as ever you have really made the person come alive here rgds Mike
2006-06-11


Kathy Lockhart
John you never fail to make me think and think and think. I am seeing someone who is needy and who isn't afraid to ask for attention, then I see the one in the corner, the one who is truly in need, silently trapped in the corner surrounded by the barbedwire that never loosens. This is such a sad tale of misery, lonliness, and sadness.
2006-06-07