Another life?


An Eternal Love

I concentrated,
Intently,
On her every word –
The blink of her eye,
The turn of her head,
And her hand touching
Her glorious hair.
And every sound she made
Floated joyously
Like tiny white feathers
That never landed –
Never attenuated –
Could never be lost.

She was embedded
Forever in my mind:
Never to be forgotten

But there came a moment
When I turned my head –
I know not why –
And I was consumed
By the mounting pyre.
The spectacle of wood
Stacked purposefully,
Rhythmically.
My stomach lurched,
I felt the heat and flame.
She called out my name.

I was someone else,
She was eradicable.
She was unchangeable...

Save she had passed through the fire.


© griffonner 2021




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Written on 2021-05-26 at 12:26

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm certain we will all meet up with the one's we love,
The feelings we have are never lost.
Sometimes just hidden away, in the back of our minds.
Thanks for sharing. Regards Alan.
2022-05-07


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
Dreamlike, mythical, mystical, or surreal, this poem has an other-worldliness that is part of our lives, but so difficult to access or capture in words.
2021-05-27