Rest in Peace


Your time is hastily up.
It's time for you to go.
Now finish your last cup.
God, say it isn't so.

The warmth of you has gone, my love.
The remains are snow and sand.
I say a prayer to the God above.
To the God of promised land.

Remember the oath we once swore?
A vow of dreams and tears.
Now you have entered heaven's door.
And startled up my fears.

Loneliness cuts me short.
I tremble in this town.
Misery life is not my sport.
I'm drowning in my frown.

I'll finish my last cup.
God, say it isn't so.
My time is hastily up.
It's time for me to go.



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-06-19 at 01:44

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Arti
So intense - I'm bookmarking this one.
"The warmth of you has gone, my love.
The remains are snow and sand.
I say a prayer to the God above.
To the God of promised land."
Beautiful, eerie images.
((hugs))
Arti.
2006-06-19


Kathy Lockhart
sadness, death, again. oh my, this is so lonely and resolute. I feel it intensely.
2006-06-19


Love Knight
i love the dramatic ending. good job
2006-06-19


Malin Johansson
This one was heartbreaking, filled with pain and sadness...
A very good poem...
Regards to you
2006-06-19