Time(only opening lines)

As the night plays out, the only thing against us is time.

Nights on this world don't have enough time so I can spend 'em with

you.

But the time I spend with you is the most valuable.

I wish I could just freeze time to its hands.

When you are spending the night with the one you love, time flies.

If I had the power to stop time, the only moment or moments I would

use that force is the only moments I bare with you.



Poetry by Love Knight
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Written on 2006-06-20 at 06:31

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gills
how nicely written, your sentiments described very clearly in this text
2006-12-19


she
There you go again!!!!Stealing the day's show as if you have mastered the art!What I love about your poetry is the way it is so plain honest,so true,so refreshing.....I mean,who ele would think of freezing time in his hands????A beautiful piece,my dear.
2006-06-20


Zoya Zaidi
"When you are spending the night with the one you love, time flies. "

So, true!

Beautifully put together!

**hugs**
love. xxx. Zoya
2006-06-20