A small verse about/to Mom. I know you are at peace now.


Void of The Energy

Your Meadows and Valleys are gone
Seen now only in pictures
Void of the Energy that I loved so.

Darkness inside, infinite wisdom vanished
My Mother, my tormentor, my friend
Gone now --- just gone

Your flaws are my flaws, as my hands are your hands
As your face shows through in my aging face
Void of the Energy I once knew

Your words reverberate in my mind
My teacher, my mentor, my heart
Gone now --- just gone

He got rid of all your things, quick, fast and in a hurry
Leaving the home we once knew
Void of the Energy of you.

Gone now --- just gone.



Poetry by LacyxDevine
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Written on 2022-01-29 at 02:11

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Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Congratulations on the nomination; so proud of you.
2022-02-08


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2022-01-31


Ann Wood The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice said it and may your mom rest in peace
2022-01-29


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
An emotive poem, well written. Repetition can sometimes be a trip-up, but not so here. I suspect there is anger just beneath the surface.
I have had to get rid of things twice: Getting rid of my dad's was easy, strangely - and there didn't seem to be that much of it. Then of course my mother's 'things' included a lot of his that were left remaining and was doubly difficult.
My wife and I have started clearing out 'stuff' so that our children have a much easier task of it!
2022-01-29