The Amazing Crimson Evening Sky

The Amazing Crimson Evening Sky is lit up by the descending sun as it settles on the horizon

Yet the warmth of the sun still remains as it settles out of sight behind the golden edged clouds

As I sit and ponder on the garden bench I reflect on the day that has passed and wonder why the sky still bears light as the sun goes to sleep

I smell the subtle far away smoke of a distant log fire as it's cloudy smoke falls about my person

And yet the warmth of the sun still remains

Wow what an amazing spectacle as the heat of the scorching midday solar fusion remains as the wrath of it's fiery furnace sinks below the horizon.

The hot baking sun has finished it's work for another day

I am yet amazed as my body is still warming as the moon comes out to start it's shift

As I turn to go in........

SHIT! My house is on fire !!





Poetry by English War Veteran aged 98
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Written on 2006-06-23 at 00:46

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Lourdes
shit....so is mine!!
Good work fellow war-veteran.
Your humour is as wrinkled as our faces.
Wicked Sir Alistair Mc Farenheit,, wicked.
Love and soup ¤¤ Lourdes
2006-06-30


Kathy Lockhart
LOLOLOL!!!! Oh I was so caught up in the beauty of this verse. All the way to the end. This is hilarious! Very, very, very, clever! I loved it. it's booked marked! kathy
2006-06-23