Raven's cough: adapting a line of Dylan Thomas's from "Especially when the October wind."

 

As though chidden of God: Thomas Hardy, from "Neutral Tones"




August

rhymes with autumn, and there are surely foretastes. Red leaves here, there, mornings in the 50s. September, though! --- summer often roars back, sultry, heavy, raging against its own dying. But daylight shrinks, leaves crispen and wither, and all the coffeeshops go pumpkin-spice, for Pete's sake. By Oscar Wilde's birthday in mid-October, we're all right. One can walk a mile or more without succumbing to heatstroke. And the foliage starts doing its thing, its annual flash and flare of colour and fire. Give me a year of October, maybe early November as well. I'm a sucker for Thomas Hardy bleakness; I swoon for the raven's cough in winter sticks; I thrill to the sun gone pale as though chidden of God.





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Written on 2022-08-24 at 04:37

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Gosh! This morning is full of gems on PoetBay... and this poem of yours is so 'elevated' and 'academic' in its style and content! Quite, quite brilliant. Thank you for sharing it, I am enriched by reading your words.
Allen
2022-08-24