Summer Dies

wish you were with me?
because now i am alone,
only my own fault.

rain falls around me,
but no one can see me cry,
summer is dying.

maybe it's your fault,
the end of this depression,
leaves a twisted scar.



Haiku by laura
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Written on 2006-06-25 at 23:04

Tags Seasons  Alone  Fault 

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..me..
this is awesome, never stop writing laura! i look forward to reading your next poems
2006-07-09


Love Knight
This is true and an amazing suite. Great Job keeping it toghether. Young Talent.
2006-06-26


Arti
Ouch. Such loneliness.
I hope my ((HUGS)) make you feel better.
(((((tight hugs)))))
Arti.
2006-06-26


Kathy Lockhart
This is very good. So deep in its meanings and well written verses. Excellent! :) kathy
2006-06-25