the cat walks in my garden unaware i am watching her


cat

she has wide eyes
gets on the wall
for a cat walk
she watches
something like a damsel
she is although
a being small
yet i can see
a lady in her soul
she has hardened
after a broke heart
lives her own
does't care after all



Poetry by MIRZA AHMER BEG The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-04-06 at 05:16

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Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
Thanks Mirza
For sharing a delightful poem.
Regards Alan
2023-04-07


MIRZA AHMER BEG The PoetBay support member heart!
although the essence to convey was very difficult but am very happy that the message has gone home ,thanks both of you for encouraging me with exactly the words that decipher real meaning from my work
2023-04-07


D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Ah, Mirzra, you have captured the essence of the cat. Bravo!
2023-04-06


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
It is good to see one of the 'originals' (like myself) still submitting their poetry. This one brings to the reader a glimpse of that small being very effectively. Blessings, Allen
2023-04-06