the immensity of the sea (tanka)

the immensity
of the sea at sunset:
all people dissolve
with the echo of the waves
as time goes by, unfazed



Poetry by Anna Banasiak
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Written on 2023-11-10 at 15:21

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Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
Your poem in a way inspired to begin with mine. A force of a poem. Beautiful, indeed.
2023-11-10


shells
I am a sea lover and this is perfect, love the line " all people dissolve"
2023-11-10


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful! I love tankas and you’ve employed that form well here.

Simple yet elegant
2023-11-10