Two 4 December Haiku

 

Bird pecking tin roof

Stove warming inhabitants

Ski tracks below moon

 

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Man buried in snow

Loud ravens dancing above

skitrack's sudden end





Haiku by Ingvar Loco Nordin The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-12-04 at 09:52

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
I like how the two haikus work in conjunction to each other. By themselves, they are weak. Together, amazing.
2023-12-07


Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
The discipline of the construct adds great power to this.
Blessings, Allen
2023-12-04