Thougths in my head, it was a dream last night
that I remember when I wake up!!!
Sincerely Dan


The supernova in my mind


Sparkling stars
in a deep blue skye
fairy tale telling
That we don't have a clue
but over the gate of wisdom
A supernova starts building

A new home sparkling and shimmering
A nebula is the home for newborn stars
but there is something wrong, the angels are singing
don't crush the world, stand up, get up united

- the new world is going to show us
that, if we don't stop now
we all have to pay the price
Time will stop for us
the future who could be
with peace and harmony

So a new world is rising in mind and thoughts
if we going to have it, we really have to stop
So stop stop stop pushing each other

To hell with wars an personal egoism
try to find balance that does not exist
ism schism go away


Reach your helping hand
give from your heart not your brain
try to step away from yesterdays scene

try to synchronize your brain and heart
peace love and understanding
is our way to a new beginning




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-07-01 at 11:37

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Lots of truth here. It's time we human beings get our act together. I enjoyed reading your poem.
2009-03-13


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2009-03-13


Kathy Lockhart
Outstanding writing and a superview of what the world could/should/would be if we all just followed the teachings of Christ. "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.", "love the Lord God with all you heart soul and mind and love your neighbor as yourself." It seems these are the basic tenets of peace in this world. There are three things "Faith, Hope and Love and the greatest of these is Love." If only we would live according to what is taught by our creator and follow His examples we would still be living in a land called Eden. However, we must now wait for Heaven because there are just too many who choose to ignore the Great Teacher. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. kathy
2006-07-01


Zoya Zaidi
Bravo! Dan, I LOVE THIS PIECE!
2006-07-01