WATER RETENTION

I must say I feel comfortable,
Living within my skin.
Hasn't got loose and flabby,
And doesn't need ironing.

But I do feel my center of gravity,
Is getting closer to the floor.
They say water retention,
Is something to look forward for.

Jogging in the parks I don't have to do,
Spending My time running to the loo.
Water retention isn't that something,
That camels have;
I bet they don't spend their time,
Running to the lav.




Poetry by Alan J Ripley The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2024-07-04 at 00:07

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Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
I love how you tied up the poem with the allusion to camels
2024-07-09