I want life quality


Begging for life now

the sun is going down over me

and the night is coming




Haiku by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-07-04 at 09:32

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Lourdes
This
breaks me
:::.. . . I cannot comment further
2006-07-05


Teala
Very powerful and vivid.
2006-07-05


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Dan this darkness looming bpoem is the more powerful because of its simplicity

the few words pervade a looming cloud

and the approach of nightfall well done rgds mike
2006-07-04