Panicanxiety II


Captured by this cruelty of yours
which is such a painful force
My freedom has been taken away
you suffocate me in a horrible way
You held your hand to my mouth
because you knew I tried to shout
You stopped the life of oxygen to exist
you chained my wrist
You squeezed my veins
And the pain still remains
You filled my life with greater fear
you stopped everyone who dared come near
You locked me in the prison cell
That became my darkest hell
I never thought my heart would beat again
I was afraid that hell would just maintain
But this hope of mine
You can never take away
I Believe that I'll be fine someday
because
In this strength of mine
my soul feels fine
And I know the worst is over
I have lots of things to rediscover
You can't take away my power or my will
Because Im here
Fighting still





Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-07-05 at 21:48

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Zoya Zaidi
Dear Malin this is a beautifully described piece, it flows so well, it has the force of a feeling felt from the core of your being, a really good poem. I just love it. Most of all I like the fighting spirit you diplay here in the end...It is so 'you'!
**Hugs**
Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-07-06


Zoya Zaidi
Dear Malin this is a beautifully described piece, it flows so well, it has the force of a feeling felt from the core of your being, a really good poem. I just love it. Most of all I like the fighting spirit you diplay here in the end...It is so 'you'!
**Hugs**
Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-07-06


Zoya Zaidi
Dear Malin this is a beautifully described piece, it flows so well, it has the force of a feeling felt from the core of your being, a really good poem. I just love it. Most of all I like the fighting spirit you diplay here in the end...It is so 'you'!
**Hugs**
Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-07-06



I was scared!!! dear malin a very beautiful poem here!!!lovely!!!kissess
2006-07-06


Arti
You're strong... You'll make it through... :)
Just keep smiling!
Very vivid write.
2006-07-06


Kathy Lockhart
Yes, Malin....you fight! I know the panicanxiety is a horrible nightmare that does put those who suffer with it in a hellaious prison. You have strength in your power and will! You are stronger than this evil attacker of your spirit. You will soar above like an eagle! xx (hugs) kathy
2006-07-06


Teala
There is a lot of strength and hope in this dark poem, I love it...
2006-07-06


Benny Strukelj
Fight for beeing you
Live and be tru
Free you will be a day
Just find your own way

Show the world that you exist
Shout it out even whit your fist
Be a demon and stand strong
Lurn to stand that will take you long

Do not ever fear a little man
Show him that you better can
Go to hell and find your stringts
That will happenes onley brings

Find a frend to hold your hand
Let him take you to a security land
But be your self all the time
Show the world that your worth mor than a dime
2006-07-05


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey there this is such a powerful description of an ailment that debiliates well done rgds mike
2006-07-05


*Ness*
love this poem...it feels as though someone is stifling and hiding you from the world..not a good thing to be exposed to ....well expressed... :) great work as always :)
2006-07-05