Rain and Pain


Is a day with rain,
A day to pray,
Or a day with pain
That tears away
At those who blame
Those who say
That a day with rain
Is a day with pain?




Poetry by Morpheus
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Written on 2006-07-07 at 03:11

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Daybreaker
Nice play with words and their meaning. I really enjoyed the read.
2006-12-23


kid
I would say u poem is a pun. but still meaningfull
2006-07-07


Aashish Thakur
its little bit abstract..but left something on our mind...
2006-07-07


Kathy Lockhart
this is a lesson in one sentence. This is a piece to study. It has a look of simplicity but it is crammed full of complexity. It has a wonderful rhythmic flow that suits its appearance. So much to this Mysterious Piece. a riddle for each to solve for him/herself. kathy
2006-07-07