I thought I would try this form.. starting with 8 lines, then 4, then 2 and then the final 1


The new lady in my life...(diminishing challenge)

It's that lingering look as I get up to leave
The breathless sigh at my departure
It's that feeling that only I could achieve
By just being you you somehow enrapture
I am smitten, there's nothing else to say
You are all I could want and more
I Think about you when I go away
In my mind you're always to the fore

But separation is just a pause
it's like kindle awaiting its spark
My heart beats faster and I know the cause
When tonight will be a "walk in the park"

I know that I'm not your only love
But we fit together like hand in glove

I don't mind sharing, I know you're caring.





** My partner got me a very much wanted dog; a little female from the dog rescue centre. We both love her already. She has a shockingly bad back story but she just wants to love and be loved. Today was the first time we had to leave her at home with a doggy sitter. It was quite stressful (for us!)











Poetry by Liam The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2025-01-13 at 20:30

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arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh wow, your days are filled with love,
So glad, you’re so blessed as you bless.
A fun form of halves! As well🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
2025-01-13