The Satsuma Criterion
Waking up
in the Eastern bedroom at Noret Farm in Niemisel,
having risen from a dream set in a police environment,
I find myself in doubt
concerning the universe I have woken up in:
- is it truly the same universe
that I fell asleep from last night?
And if I fell asleep from that universe,
where did I end up?
But my concern
about the authenticity
of the universe in which my bed stood
when I woke from that dreamt-of police setting
this morning, was swiftly put to rest in the bathroom,
when, on the bike roller cardboard box,
from the Italian Elite
- which I use for storage of various workout clothes
I'm currently not using -
I rediscovered the brightly glowing little heap
of fiery satsuma peels
that I carelessly left there last night
before picking my teeth with birchwood toothpicks
of the Jordan brand,
brushing those same teeth with Zendium toothpaste,
rinsing them with Dentan sodium flouride,
and moisturizing my face with Canoderm lotion,
before thoroughly expelling the final excrements
of the long-spent February 16th,
and going to bed in the Eastern bedroom
with Gaston Bachelard's Poetics of Space
and Roger Connah's poetry collection
Paraphernalia from Chance Eras
The small heap of satsuma peels on the Elite box
becomes the citrus hub of recognition
around which this universe prowls,
all its worlds, as far as we know, intact;
all imaginable forms of life & death
in full swing, galaxy cluster after galaxy cluster
in the screeching horde of inklings
that constitute our universe
Yes, the satsuma's peel-heap becomes the focal point
of the reality I have chosen,
and the unreality that has been granted me
This is the Satsuma Universe,
scaled down to this small golden heap,
radiant in its fire-orange, feather-light primal force,
amidst all the madcap creation's colorful prowess,
wastefully dispensing its improbabilities
in long spirals of blood-blotched cardiovascular flow
Poetry by Ingvar Loco Nordin

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Written on 2025-02-17 at 11:38




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