Immortal Lines by an Aging Poet

If wisdom could come from a joyless life
of a hundred years where love's never found
but hatred comes at the point of a knife,
then these lines offer hope with this poem's sound.

From dawn to dusk, life drifts—cold and resolved.
It is too grand and epic to give pause,
to care, for us: fate and being's too evolved!
The whys and wherefores, reasons for first cause

to know, escape us. We have only time:
time to find meaning in ourselves and God.
To surmount life and death takes lifetimes: rhyme,
or measure, fails to capture or to laud

how existence can be both cruel and kind;
like drought and rain, life starves or feeds the grass.
So, spend time with loved ones—seek friends and find
moments together to recall and pass.




Poetry by Ngoc Nguyen The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2025-02-21 at 15:02

Tags Life  Hope  Time 

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Ray Miller
Hello Ngoc. I think the 3rd stanza is much better. Not so sure about 2nd stanza, it would help if the original version were still there to compare with.
2025-02-23


Ray Miller
Hello Ngoc. Interesting poem, lots to think about. The time/lifetime rhyme jarred a bit, perhaps too perfect.
2025-02-21