Save me from myself



Give me your hand
drag me up from the
pit that I am about to fall into

My illusive reality
is falling apart
behind my

alternative paradise

I now see my Hell
But I have seen heaven
I know how to restore it

Just stand by me
for a while my fellow human
I will stumble for a while

Untill I regain my strength

Allow me to rest my head
on your shoulders
for a while, smile at me

It's one of those days
I am sure you know
what I mean

Thank you dear stranger
but before you go your way
let me tell you what i have

learned : Your worse enemy
is yourself, know yourself
and you shall overcome everything



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Written on 2006-07-11 at 00:34

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Malin Johansson
This one is so true...
If we know what we stand and bleieve in , who we are, we can make it and walk our own way...A very good poem here!!
Regards and hugs
2006-07-11



Lovely poem indeed..i love the title!!!kissess
2006-07-11


Zoya Zaidi
What a beatiful way you have
to say, what you want to say,
Yes, life treats us sometimes in a weired way,
Everything looks blue and black to us.
But there is a silver lining always there,
Behind every cloud that seems to burst,
Every cloud that holds in it self a storm,
The same cloud hide behind it, the Sun!

**Hugs**
Love, xxx,Zoya
2006-07-11


Arti
This is such a powerful write. I love these lines:
"I now see my Hell
But I have seen heaven
I know how to restore it

Just stand by me"
((hugs))
2006-07-11


Teala
learned : Your worse enemy
is yourself, know yourself
and you shall overcome everything

Very much agreed--great poem. I am here if you ever need to talk.
2006-07-11