Renga to lastromantichero's Haiku.


Renga - What is this

"What is this matter
An aching in my soft heart
Butterflies again"

This is the abyss called love
Confusing but compelling



Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-07-15 at 10:57

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Arti
Excellent!
2006-07-15


Ron. S. King
Indeed... Love is such a compelling sense, an abyss of emotive depth which has only the echo of passion...A nice and compelling read, poet...Thank you for its sharing... Ron
2006-07-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
excellent
but note it as a seperate
stanza
rgds mike but so good exactly WHAT I ENVISAGED WE CAN POST THE TOTAL AS SOON AS
WE HAVE IT ALL
AS A JOINT EFFORT LOLOL
2006-07-15