Inspired by Malins poem playfull passion(it's my first erotic poem so please be kind...)


When two become one




Like two children
we want to learn
more about
each other

Discover what tickles
and what feels good
how we can become
one

If I touch your
special place
I can hear you
moan from pleasure

That makes me so *****
I want to give you
more...it excites me
when I see you tremble

from pleasure...My playful nature
Awakens my spirit...I want to
tease you...I take a feather
and explore your body

I look deep into your eyes
and I smile...Our souls connect
You take me in your arms
and i surrender...

I loose the perception of time
and space...is just you and me
now...Our lips meet in an enchanting
moment...Now I tremble full of

anticipation...You know what to do,
I trust you...I look deep into your eyes
smile, touch your hair and close my eyes

I am lost in you and you are lost in me
with rythmic moves we join to the dance
of love...Our breathes join the moment
that you and me become one...

I L O V E YOU!!!

Let's play again!!!I want to learn more
about you....The scent of love fills the room...
Come on....and I kiss your lips again...




Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-07-22 at 23:22

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Kathy Lockhart
well now, .......ah....I just am a....alone here...feeling the heat of passion and nothing to do with it.....Very well done all my senses are alive and eager for satisfaction. : o kathy
2006-07-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
woweeeeeeeeeeeee
get the cold shower running
its getting kinda hotter on the bay a lovely expression and a gifted piece of erotic writing
your first one hey
dont believe it its too accomplished
lololol rgds mike hey send it to playboy magazine
2006-07-24


Teala
Erotic and fun at the same time, I am glad I discovered it!
2006-07-23


Arti
This is beautiful! I'm surrounded by love left, right and center... ummm this feels good!
((hugs))
2006-07-23


Malin Johansson
WOW!!! this one is hot and so full of loving passion...A very good first erotic poem here dear:))
I have to bookmark this one..:))
*applause*
Regards to you
2006-07-23