didn't know there would be a continuation to "Her Black Satin Slip" but I guess there is. My sister asked, "but what happened next?" So, i thought I would try and find out. Here is a portion.


The Ultimate Red Lips

He leaves her standing by the door
crying, her eyes are red
swollen from his fists of rage
He screams, " I wish you were dead."

Off he stumbles into the night
he falls across the child's rusty bike
catching himself on the hanging branch
he screams, "I'll not be home tonight!"

In his car he dials the familiar number
one he uses in times like these
he knows the woman who'll take him in
one who gives him what he pleases

Her voice he hears and his lust abounds
for he knows that he will get some action
He stumbles to the motel door
crazy with desire and rage for satisfaction

He knocks and she answers the door
wearing her black satin slip
he sees her walking away from him
but notices the ultimate red lips...

kathy lockhart
6/27/06











Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-07-27 at 03:27

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Will
that adds to anticipation for the next piece
2006-08-02


Teala
Very vivid and deep--good one.
2006-07-29


Sandy Hiss
What a sexy write. Enjoyed reading this Kathy
2006-07-28



Thank you Kathy for this continuation, which is as empathic and well written as the first part!
2006-07-27


Troll
well, between the 2 poems you've written quite a snapshot of a situation. i like how you included the wife/girlfriend and what she goes through... that's the part of the picture often left unpainted. there he is, noticing the ultimate red lips, after he busted the (second-best?) lips at home. you paint a picture of desire and lust, but not a pretty picture. a picture in harsh light, revealing bad behavior for what it really is. well done. :)
2006-07-27


Malin Johansson
You gave me nice imagination in this poem, great to read a continue on the other poem...!!!
rgds
2006-07-27



Now I feel better after reading this!!!! I can feel the true feelings of your character...very nice poetry mom....kissess(daughter)
2006-07-27


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey kathy what another warm poem
vibrantly taking
the reader to new heights in imagination rgs mike
2006-07-27


Arti
This is awsome.. its gripping. The last part was kinda tantalizing, this is a touch on the reality of life. I love this touch of reality to what is far removed from most of our lives...
ummmm do continue this story... maybe you could put them all together at the end and call it "a ballad of the black satin slip" or something...
2006-07-27