I love you... I pray that your face would torture my memories rather than I forget.


Torture Me

Torture me.

Taunt, haunt, mystify, abandon me

Please!

Let me not forget you
or a kiss that could never be.

Torture me.



Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-07-29 at 09:27

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Amanda K
Short but powerful.

keep it up,
2006-08-17


Daybreaker
Oh how nice with a few lines!

A really great write.

I think though that maybe you should think about the lining of the poem. Maybe the effect of it will be stronger if it looks something like this:


Torture me.

Taunt, haunt, mystify, abandon me.

Please!

Let me not forget you
or a kiss that could never be.

Torture me!



What do you think?
2006-07-31


Malin Johansson
In time the pain will fade away, and the memories you will have will be happy ones, and it will bring a smile upon your face, so dont forget her, let the torture contain untill it transforms to beautiful memories :))
Regards From me in sweden :))
2006-07-29


Arti
Hmmmm. Send her this, if not a letter!
2006-07-29