Thank you Kathy!I could not write this without you!


The chariot of the sun co-write with Kathy Lockhart



I wont command the
chariot of the sun

to stay, before I see
the sunset of Today

Don't bring me tomorrow
Before I see the sun

Resting between the hills
Over the hills and far away

The darkness approaching
with fear and sorrow

But the stars twinkle
spreading the light

of tomorrow
The darkness is here

to stay
Oh! My God save me

Will there be another tomorrow
when my soul is torn apart

Will there be another tomorrow
for me to stand up

stumble and fall again
Will there be another tomorrow

I anxiously wonder
till the dawn of the sun

Oh tomorrow bring me life again
for my death is surely near

Oh tomorrow bring me light again
for me to see my way

Oh tomorrow, I long for you
my hope lies only in tomorrow

The sun is rising on the
Hackberry hills

Wild horse
Let me ride you

run
through the canyons

I live yet to see
another day

Thank you Lord!




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Written on 2006-07-29 at 21:13

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Will
Well from what I've read I would expect no less. Tremendous Write!!!!!!

Indeed this is definitely a must read....
2006-08-01


wee2souls
beautifuly written you bothe!!
cindy
2006-07-30


barbie
All I can say is..excellent! This was full of so many good things; peace, longing, raw feelings..I really loved this. Barbie
2006-07-30


Malin Johansson
YES WE LIVE to se another day :)))
This is so beautiful, really good poem here you two, I have to bookmark this one :))
Hugs
2006-07-30


Kathy Lockhart
It was a pleasure writing with you. You have such a talent dear one. You are inspirational!!!! xx kathy
2006-07-30


Zachary P. B.
Beautiful...

I loved the line:

"Don't bring me tomorrow
Before I see the sun"

Beautiful write... The light of the sun guides us day by day, but in that night of darkness and torture soon dies to the sun again. Fear not..

Z
2006-07-29


Arti
Beautiful union of the expressions of two wonderful hearts, ladies! This is a sun-fest!
2006-07-29


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
well done you two a brilliant cooperation of two minds as one rgds mike
2006-07-29