Chaos, love, rain. =)


Summer Storm

A dissapointing drought dissipates all desirable dreams
And then -- a cloud
And two, and three... thousands of gray watchmen, guarding us like angels
And then -- a drip
Another
Another
It is raining!
Do you remember the last storm we were in?
The pitter-patter of the rain cannot block out the beating of our hearts
The lightning smiles a knowing smile
A whoop and a holler from the thunder arrives,
My heart is trying to escape my chest
And your laughter drowns everything out...
A disappointing drought dissipates all desirable dreams
But a summer storm reminds me of you.



Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-07-29 at 22:16

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Inked.
I feel like I have lived this, and I feel a sort of happy grief.

S'possible? I hope so.
2006-07-31


barbie
Oh my...ohhhhhhh my...sigh...this was inexplicably wonderful! Such a longing, and intensity, as storms and loves can sometimes have..ahh, what a delight to read! Barbie
2006-07-30


Dan Cederholm
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A great and outstanding poem Zachary!!!

I love sunnerrain it is so refreshing!!!

Awell done work here BRAVO!!!

Sincerely Dan

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2006-07-30


Teala
Fantastic!! Very vivid and mind-blowing! Love it!
2006-07-30


Kathy Lockhart
I love this poem. The alliteration is very clever and the rain theme is brilliant. bookmarked! kathy
2006-07-30


Arti
I love rains...I love water in any form. Bring 'em on...the puddles, the impromptu drenchings, the unplanned delays... I love the rainfall.
Wonderful blend of water with flowing memories...
2006-07-30


Malin Johansson
memories can do alot :))
Beautiful and well done poem here Zachary :)
Regards from Sweden
2006-07-30