part V of black slip series.


Crimson Clothing

He was blind with madness
as he rushed back home to his wife
to ask for forgiveness again
after he had just murdered the life

of the woman who answered his call
the one in her black satin slip
the one who always performed
while wearing the red on her lips

Quiet now in his entry through the door
covered in the red blood of her death
he slowly mounted the stairs
careful not to take one loud breath

because he wasn't ready to face his wife
she would see the results of his deeds
ask too many questions again
and not listen to his promise and pleas.

As he showered, he thought of nothing
but how he was to cover his tracks.
Lies to tell to his wife and child
and how to get her to take him back.

The blood ran red then pink down the drain
out of the shower's porcelain stall.
but the clothes! what of his clothes!
"I'll have to burn them all!"

She heard each step he took into the house
quietly she opens the bathroom door
and sees the results of the carnage:
crimson covered clothing lying on the floor.

A scream of unbelievable shock
filled this house of doom
He bolted from the shower in panic
Then he slapped her across the room.

Again in a rage, he beat her unconscious
and left her there for dead.
In a rush, he ran for the door and then
he heard his child call, "Dad?"...

Kathy Lockhart
7/30/06
















Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-07-31 at 06:06

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Will
As I've read you a couple of times and I get word about your deeds (works) by this piece this is not just words you are truly a gifted writer.

This is one hell of a piece.....

EXCELLENT WRITE!!!!
2006-08-01


wee2souls
WOW!!! Kathy how you are so talented
so so so so!!!at the edge of my chair just waiting what is going to happen next!!!! strong emotional
true life this can happen....shivers it gave me....thrilling and chilling it does make you feel...loved!!loved! this piece of such gifted story telling poetry writer you truly are!!! AND YOU SHOULD PUBLISH..:))))))
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CINDY (Mac) :)))
2006-07-31


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
I can just say(type) Oh My God! wow Kathy! you are so talented!A breathtaking story! You should publish a book one day!
*storming applause*
2006-07-31


Teala
VERY powerful, it gave me chills...this leaves me hungering for the rest of the tale..excellent.
2006-07-31



A powerful poem...a beautiful series....a very sad story....kissess (daughter)
2006-07-31


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this chilling narrative has developed into a horrendous tale a powerful and hard hitting tale
personally
i prefer romance lololol
but a good text kathy
2006-07-31


Arti
Chilling. Wow. That was intense! Poor kid...Poor ladies...Awsone write! Can I rate this at 100??
2006-07-31


Zachary P. B.
That was a wonderful narrative. The rhyming and rhythm was great. I had chills as I read this.

Great job =)
Z
2006-07-31