Happy or down and out


In moments of happiness
every thing feels great and fine
and when you look with a smile
staring at the sun all things you can

But when you are down and out you
always wonder why always me and feell
like walking on thorns that's the time
you wish you never where born




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-08-03 at 14:12

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Teala
Uplifting and inspiring!
2006-08-04


Zachary P. B.
Truthful words are hardly uttered,
But you did and this poem makes me think...

Thanks for the words of truth and a beautiful poem to ponder. =)

Z
2006-08-04


Will
just a true observation, conveyed well

Nice Write
2006-08-03


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
So very true Dan in your own subtle style well don for reminging us of our own foibles rgds mike
2006-08-03