In the ERA of internet and MTV . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Melody: My baby grewe up in a brand new Cadillac!
Sincerely Dan


Taking control of our life


My baby grewe up
by the computer screen
surfing on WWW

Baby Baby Please
You are teasing me

So Baby go away
from the computer
and kiss me


My Baby grewe up
besides the TV
watching MTV

Baby Baby please
look at me

So Baby go away
from the TV
and look at me


So we sat there in the sofa
look in each others eyes
listening to the rain

We are pleasing
and teasing

So we stay there together
and holding each other
on MTV Muse was playing




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-08-08 at 16:02

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Zachary P. B.
I loved this Dan. "taking control of our life" we all need to get away from computers and tv's and love and live to our fullest potential.

I loved the idea of this. =)

z
2006-08-08


rider
lol...Life is certainly a split-living, in that husband and wife seem to live in seperate rooms, each doing their own thing and simply e-masiling each other...I liked this poem, Dan... I trust your baby spends less time on those machines...Ron.
2006-08-08