one million pieces

breaking myself into small pieces
tenderly storing them in little boxes
altogether they are my soul
so i pick up all the boxes
one million pieces of destiny

and throw them into the sea
hoping someday

At least one box will be found
and i`ll be one step closer
To myself



Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2005-08-29 at 23:37

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
:) this is interesting... putting your pieces (your soul) into little boxes and throwing them into the sea hoping to find at least one someday... i like the image i get in mind with these words... i love the way you wrote this text and what it expresses... i particularly like the feel of it... a longing with a ray of hope that isnt too far away... its nice :) ... although in my personal view, i think were the only ones who can find the boxes and glue together the pieces within, you know :) really good poem... i enjoyed this one very much... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-08-31


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
i wonder now, how you manage to post 7 poems when the limit is 5 per week? unless you are a member.
2005-08-29