Poetic terrorism

Your words hit me like a thousand knifes falling from the sky
Darker than the night ahead
Pushes me into a deep hole
Why you hate me
I do not know
I just wished you hit me instead
Wounds heal
But my soul will forever be damaged
All from your poetic terrorism




Poetry by Evelyn
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Written on 2006-08-15 at 18:19

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Zainab
haha :)
I loved this poem too
very well expressed
It's a book mark
Rate:4

Yes sometime people hate us we even don't know the reason!
2006-09-09


Zachary P. B.
i hope your soul heals, because you are a sweet and meaningful writer. =)

we all must face an enemy sometime, but we shouldn't have to with a fellow poet, an aid to humanity is what poetry is, not a weapon...

z
2006-08-15


Kathy Lockhart
Oh my how awful that you have to be terrorized on this place of safety! This is not good! It must stop! I guess there are mean people everywhere. I am sorry one has been tormenting you. (hugs) kathy
2006-08-15


Will
Deep.....

Meaningful Write
2006-08-15