Julie Zerbe
A very sensual poem and just like what I feel when he is not around... J
2006-08-23

So beautiful to read, it flows soft like a forgotten creek where kids once played, then grew up and forgot to come back. The creek has life to give, it's waiting for someone to find it behind its overgrown banks. It's cool refreshing water waits like her, to give life to someone. But those kids have grown up and gone. Some, someday, will rediscover that creek and bring his grankids to splash in its cook pools. An it will be real.
Some how the lines and words of your poem just seemed to flow, hense the creek.
2006-08-23

Dan Cederholm
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Hello Kathy what a great love poem and all

the waiting to fullfill the very special

betwen the two!!!

Great writing and great reading!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-22

Saga
This is what every love and loved one want to wants to feel and dream of the other. Sweet and sultry.
2006-08-22

Chris Fernie
Dear Kathy,

I liked the circularity of your plaintive poem; it reminded me of one of those romantic rounds like the full version of 'Scarborough Fair'. I very much hope that your poem will not be unrequited for too long!

Cheers, Chris Fernie (Bolton, England)
2006-08-22

lastromantichero
What a beautiful and softly sensuous poem this is your smooth style come thruogh in this lovely text i will book mark this rgds Mike
2006-08-22

Sometimes I always dream like this and hoping that someday there is a man who loving me for who I am!!!! lovely poem Mom!!!kissess(daughter)
2006-08-22

wee2souls
a beautiful write..
indepth poem
I felt in this read..
cindymac
XXXxxxxx
2006-08-22

Zachary P. B.
but it's the waiting that's important... i mean, the journey, the individual, the love (requited or not) is what actually matters...

a very deep, emotional poem here Kathy. =)

don't look too hard, he might be under your nose

God bless dear Kathy,
z
2006-08-22