Where shall I begin?!


The unknowness of restlessness
as I twist my head back and forward
in craziness of a little laziness
in speed of time, it doesnt rhyme
far far away from the day
I wander on my feets, telling everyone
Im okey, Im okey in my restlessness
the spinning feeling of wellbeing
the circulation of medium frustration
is the restlessness of unknowness




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-08-24 at 21:17

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Beautiful poem dear!!!!kissess
2006-08-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Malin a beautifully rhythmic text and so much inyour inimitable style well done rgdsa mike you father
2006-08-24


Karoline
I like this poem,
but somehow I can't explain why
I'll try anyway:
I like the small rhymes,
they're fun and sweet and give the poem a youthful flavour in my oppinion.
Other things I enjoy is the subject
and mostly everything.
My only objection is that I think
the ending is a bit abrupt,
but that could be just me.
Anyway, I like it as I've said
so good job!
2006-08-24