actually i m a different guy than what i actually show, there's a child within me, i live in a world of my own , this poem reveals my pain of living in a world so lone.


my world of pain

this dark fog,
wraps my brave.
this world of mine,
feels like grave.

whats the reason,
that no one's here.
the only companion,
cry and tear.

echoes aloud,
my unaudible cry.
unable to listen ?
no body gave a try.

so is this silenece my wealth,
is this darkness my pride.
and is this tear my feast,
is this fear my bride.

is this an illusion,
or do i really see a light.
is this a miracle,
or is it just a poor eyesight.

should i wait,
should i be calm.
coz i see no fortune,
written onto my palm.

when do,
i live my childhood ?
i have already,
lost my milk tooth.
if now i stisfy this infant,
what do i say to my youth.

should i give up,
or should i wait.
plz do releave me,
have mercy on my state.

you still for me,
stand the mirror of jade.
rescue me plz,
before i fade.



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Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-08-27 at 10:31

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Coolaaron88
To clarify about the previous comment. When I was reading the poem, the point you were making I completely understood because I had been there before. Yes there was a lot of rhyme but still you managed to get your point across. That why I thought it was good.
2006-08-28


Coolaaron88
Lots of rhyme, I undertand where you are coming from. Good Job
2006-08-28