buzzing brain thoughts


night write

the illumination
creates expectations
in all our relations
throughout the day
darkness blends
the lines of pretend
and allows for creation
to play
nothing but quiet
incites a riot
that rages in my head
often it sustains
all that remains
of what I'm inspired
to say
it plunders
it thunders
the thoughts
that are trampled
inside my bedazzled brain
leaving me dead
sometimes unread
alone in the unyielding rain
that floods the drain
swallowing the words
that are left unheard
it's really quite insane
I rather write
late into the night
with the moon
hanging over
my head
I am full of wonder
while I sit and ponder
any benefits of going to bed...

Kathy Lockhart
8/28/06





Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-08-28 at 08:14

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Alison Clarke
Dear Kathy:

I really liked this poem: as I am a "night writer" myself. I loved the imagery with the moon. That's cool. Take care, and I hope to hear from you soon.


Sincerely yours,

Alison
2006-09-03


Phyllis J. Rhodes
I love, love, love this! Its, fun, it's so easy to relate to. I't calls to be read over and over. I pictured my self jumping rope to it!
2006-08-28


Will
Love the flow makes me feel like a trout swimming up stream and if you know me loving every minute of it...

GREAT FLOW, Great Read
2006-08-28


Arti
Lol... I'm turning into an insomniac too, and yeah, I often lie in bed, thinking of a myriad million things, without knowing where it began...
I love the last lines...
"I am full of wonder
while I sit and ponder
any benefits of going to bed..."
Good job!
2006-08-28


Malin Johansson
A great write here Kathy:)))
I do to write in the night with the moonlight above me :))
I loved the flow in this poem, yet another amazing poem from you Kathy!!!
Regards and hugs
2006-08-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there kathy

a beautiful poem and so warm rgds mike
2006-08-28



Wow! you are very wow!!!..lovely night written Mom!!!!kissess
2006-08-28


wee2souls
You!! sure like the
night write you like to
BOOGY:))
the buzz is you:))

love this buzzwriteyear:)
:)) like this read:))
sure made me buzzin
reading this:)))
love you my Mommkac
cindymac
2006-08-28