Alison Clarke
Dear Night Soul Woman:

This poem is very interesting: a kind of dream within a dream--a kind of stream-of-consciousness. It's very unique. Keep writing. Take care.


Sincerely yours,

Alison
2006-09-16

Dan Cederholm
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A Great and so humeros text NSW!!!

Scared about marriage hehehe

And who was coming from the spa center?

He or she, I get the picture that it was he

and if its he does he have shaved leggs

and talking with a bright voice hahaha!!!

Then its very scary (LOLOL)!!!


Hugs and XXX Dan

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2006-08-29

Zainab
Yes it's a bit scary
Read this one
Are you afraid of the dark!
Rate:4
2006-08-29

Will
I'm LOVING THIS!!!!!
You've done it once again (FAV)
2006-08-29

Rik
Yep, know that feeling all to well, brought a big smile to my face, which is nice, thank you. :-)
2006-08-29

Saga
Well at least it wasn't Michael jackson you were marrying. Great job!!!
2006-08-29

Judy T Lloyd
This reminds me of Groundhog's day where the scene is played over and over again. I liked the tension mingled with humor.
2006-08-29

Malin Johansson
HAHAHAHAHAHA
this one is so great I loved this one:)))
*thumbs up*
2006-08-29

keith nunes
inventive and clever poem - shit hot
2006-08-29

Emelén
hey ,, is that Michael Meyers standing behind you ?
2006-08-29

Kathy Lockhart
hmmmmmmmmm, reality or dream....dream or reality....scary or humorus...i guess it depends on the couple...For me Marriage is a scary thing right now....maybe someday it won't be....but this is a very clever write dear one....now are those kisses at the end??? Well if they are real good kisses coming from a lover now hmmmm, well that's just plain yummy! :) kathy
2006-08-29

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dont know why, I found this more humerous than scary. Though it did make me think about marriage (scary!!)
2006-08-29