well you'll undrstnd this poem , if you resolve the inversion in it , the line "can i comment" actually means "i can comment".
The clothes you wear,
The thoughts you share.
On all these aspects can I comment.
The way you walk,
The way you walk.
On all these aspects can I comment.
The way you laugh,
The way you cry.
The way you give up,
The way you try.
On all these aspects can I comment.
The way you take,
Truth or fake,
Fast asleep or awake.
On all these aspects can I comment.
All the moments that came and went,
All the time that we have spent.
on all these aspects can i comment.
but when on all these aspects i comment,
not even a single time do i repent,
coz for others you may be shine,
Coz for others you may be Devine,
But on top of all,
"You are only mine"
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Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-08-30 at 12:45
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you're only mine
The clothes you wear,
The thoughts you share.
On all these aspects can I comment.
The way you walk,
The way you walk.
On all these aspects can I comment.
The way you laugh,
The way you cry.
The way you give up,
The way you try.
On all these aspects can I comment.
The way you take,
Truth or fake,
Fast asleep or awake.
On all these aspects can I comment.
All the moments that came and went,
All the time that we have spent.
on all these aspects can i comment.
but when on all these aspects i comment,
not even a single time do i repent,
coz for others you may be shine,
Coz for others you may be Devine,
But on top of all,
"You are only mine"
copyright.
Poetry by zeeshan
Read 691 times
Written on 2006-08-30 at 12:45
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