it may be a critisism to religion, read the text and decide.


Area - Lost

We all grow up to die
life before that is just a foreplay.
The sad thing is
that it is not up to anyone when and how we die.
We just fall.
The rest
is just
a lie!

It's not up to us
faith
religion
or other people.
When our brain
stops signaling
when our lungs
stop breathing
when our heart
stops beating
We die
so stop the lie.

Dying is simple
living is harder
so why
is our biggest
fear death?
Stop listening to religion
they have no answers,
but lies.
It's just a lie!




Poetry by Poe_t
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Written on 2005-09-09 at 22:46

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
from the moment we are conceived we are on the journey to death. it is a fact of life, there is no escaping it. as to religion, that's upto the individuals involved, we all have the choice to believe or not to belive, if it helps us to belive, in our minds, i see no harm at all in. of course there are extremes as in all things, where people go crazy with religion, but in general i think it is ok. in fact good to have faith for it will lead to a better spiritual existence where we choose to be good.
2005-09-09