Title Number Three

candidly
he
chose
his
illusions

forever
binding
his
will

silence
captures
his
night

raw
emotions
his
defeat



Words by Eight-Feet
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Written on 2005-09-12 at 15:55

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epohonci
defeated by emotions... a really cool thought. (and choosing illusions candidly, i like that part too)... but why five lines in the first stanza, and four in all the rest?
2005-09-13