thoughts of a man or woman missing their dear ones on this day..


9/11 - Miss me..

A fog covered the house
just this morning
all the houses in the street
hid themselves in the fog

as strangling feeling
shook me and strangled me
i couldn`t leave the bed
And the fog smiled at me

The bed was the last place
i wanted to be this morning
But the sudden warmth i felt
while i looked outside covered me

A warmth i haven noticed
since the day you left the house
giving me a large hug
and whispered in my ear

Miss me..



Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-09-11 at 23:58

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Amanda K
That was very good.

Keep it up,
2006-09-15


Judy T Lloyd
Ah yes this one speaks to the heart of the real tragedy, the ones that we will miss.
2006-09-12


keith nunes
a great subtle touch dealing with quite deep seated emotions. good stuff
2006-09-12


Will
Captivating Piece..
Enjoyed the read
2006-09-12