i dont want u to be sad sweetie...


When you are sad...


You know, when you are sad
It is the end of world for me
It is no more happiness, no more glee
Greatest empires collapse down
Strongest cities just drowns
My heart start to die
My eyes shouts and cry
When I see you sad
You know that it is hard what I feel
Like losing everything real
Like being tortured by your own tears
Like being killed by your worst fears
Oh babe when you are sad
The sun fades away the moon darkens out
My thoughts are depressed and full of doubt
Oh babe when you are sad




Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2006-09-12 at 01:21

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Michael G
a very nice poem that is easy to relate to! good job!
2006-09-12


Phyllis J. Rhodes
So wonderfully descriptive. I feel your sadness of seeing a loved ones sadness. So beautifully presented. A sweet lament.
2006-09-12


-Angela
ah, it must be in the air... this sadnes... very kind, loving, sweet...
2006-09-12


keith nunes
nicely crafted, lovely poem
2006-09-12