Hah! Found some of my first poems, written several years ago (quite easy to see). Thought I'd post it.


Tethered tears

Never notice; never hear
My never-ending pleas
The twinkling tones
Tainting my tethered tears
See for yourself
The searing signs inside the sun
Observe the obscene on the other side
But never linger, never stay
Else it takes you too;
The tide of decay
The unrestrained untethered tears
Tearing apart
Your unwary heart




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Written on 2006-09-14 at 03:33

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Emelén The PoetBay support member heart!
it is not a misspell . It is one plea , two pleas . Apostrophes tend to ruin a poems good looks like this one _ which is a beauty .
2006-11-21


Amanda K
pleasure to read but Thomas in the 2nd line there's a mispell with pleas it should be please.Thanks.
2006-09-20


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An excellent write!
If this is an early poem of yours, then it is a perfect example of your amazing talents, then and now!
2006-09-14


Saga
This is great!!! Are you a Robert Frost fan?
2006-09-14


BlueyedSoul
awesome write ...i enjoyed reading this.
~Cindy
2006-09-14


keith nunes
has a genuine truth about it thomas!
2006-09-14