Thanks Ben Lee, for the two lines.


Blood Drips off the Town, Now.

The wind blows strong and smells like bonfires,
The dead leaves can dance, now
And the dead trees fall down, now

Ráfaga
and I drink in Autumn as the syllables drip complacently.

I am feeling tornadoes,
pruebo tornados
Blood drips off the town, now
Los tornados caen de mis ojos, ahora

I am feeling the rain,
pruebo la lluvia
Blood drips off the town now,
La lluvia gotea de mis venas, ahora

The sky is a promising orange, and
The whisper of the wind in the rye sings menace
Catch me, catch me,
The earth waits in silence

Wind dries up the night, now
Orange dries up the night, now
I am feeling tornadoes,
Blood drips off the town, now

I am seeing everything
I am seeing nothing

Everything is dead, now
Blood drips off the town, now

Todo está muerto, ahora
Blood drips off the town, now



Poetry by Inked.
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Written on 2005-09-17 at 20:11

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
"and I drink in Autumn as the syllables drip complacently" - i love this line... nice imagery :) the whole poem feels moody and colorful which to me represents autumn very well... autumn is like nature dying, setting up the way for winter, and it does so with such beauteous shades and scents, too... your poem made me feel i was witnessing it... excellent work, i enjoyed this very much... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-09-18


Commentally Ill
dark smiles, chilling to the core with gleeful horror, i love it love it love it love it!!! i don't know why i responded to this in a positive way (i am such a weirdo) but this left me with a meaty, bloody smile.. and a thirst for more.......
2005-09-17


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
i think this would work well as a song, some accoustic guitar and folky theme.
2005-09-17


SlipThruCracks
This makes such a scary, spooky, halloween mood. It's crazy.

[And a scary, spooky, Hispanic boy mood.]

<3
2005-09-17