SLOWCRY

You're crying a slowcry,
the saddest kind of cry.

You're crying a slowcry,
the prettiest kind of try.

You're sorrow is hiding
behind the cries you are trying.

Looking to find a peaceful mind
beyond this trying time.

We are confusing ourselves,
confusing our ways,
confusing our fears,
confusing our tears,

when all we really need to do
is try a slowcry.




Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2005-09-17 at 21:13

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
i would space slow cry lke so - quite like a little lullaby this. something to sing to your children at night when they are feeling sad.
2005-10-02


Commentally Ill
(tries a slow cry)

damn, they always come out in big gulps of air and sporadic sobs... slowcry, can't decide if that would be worse or not.

i like it.
2005-09-17